Yes, @kemmyb. It is frightening and a lot to place upon a thirteen year old. Some societies the journey is even dangerous just to prove a young man's worth. Raef's courage in undertaking the quest for his family's security is admirable. I feel that the obstacles he faced and lessons he learned along the way and at the market prepared him for adulthood. I also feel he was successful in his return home having tackled his fear of the cave and mountain.

I hope that his other sandal is waiting for him in the vicinity where it slipped from his foot.

I'm pleased that my descriptive narratives helped guide you through the scenes as though you were there urging him on. For some reason, I can picture you locating a larger rock and handing it to him to throw into the trees to chase off the predator. I'm laughing right now!

You are the epitome of a commentator, and I appreciate every word you bring to analyze my stories.

Take care and have a good rest of your week.

!ALIVE