I almost forgot to reply man and that would have been terrible after such an engaging comment from you.
The Fact does indeed sound similar to your composition. Great minds think alike, I really enjoyed your song too. I thought it was pretty impressive how quickly he wrote the song and put music to it. Mick really has a way of telling stories through his music. He is great live too, there is a lovely honesty and shyness in how he carries himself, but when closes his eyes and sings it's like he's the most confident man in the room.
Great shares this week again man, when you strip away lyrics, must songs wont stand up alone, but wgen they do they are a gift to the ears.