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kemmyb in Freewriters • 2 years ago

What a poignant story! The way you narrate this couple's relationship and love journey is touching and suspenseful. Like the binder, who I later discovered is the narrator (hehe, nice one), I was filled with curiosity as to Wesley's whereabouts after he disappeared for 365 days! It all makes sense.

Sometimes, it takes just one incidence to capture a person's attention and make them appreciate the brevity of life. Your story portrays the need to seize each moment and make every one count.

Wesley and Marietta wasted time apart on a frivolous reason (I blame Wesley more) but I'm glad they found their way back to each other again, even if it's just for a short time. You skilfully show the power of love to transcend time and circumstances even in the face of mortality. Beautifully written as always! Take care and have a wonderful weekend. 😊 !PIMP

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justclickindiva 2 years ago

Hello @kemmyb. I'm pleased for your visit and lovely words for my story. Yes, I wanted to narrate the couple's life from the viewpoint of the journal. Taking in the husband's side of the story about the breakup left the journal yearning for more.

When the words stopped coming, the journal became concerned. It was fun to write from an inanimate object's point of view. I was hoping I captured the journal's feelings about divulging the deepest thoughts of its owner.

If it's one thing I learned from this story was that no matter how big an issue a disagreement may seem, there is always hope. Sometimes it takes distance to realize the mistakes made. One can only hope that the distance is not too far, and the time passed has not been too long. It would have been a waste of a relationship if Wesley had passed away without trying to make amends, and Marietta had not forgiven him so that they could spend however much time left documenting memories together for the journal.

I love your analysis and thoughtful insight into the couple and their journey through the eyes of the journal.

I appreciate your support as always. Take care and have a good rest of your weekend.

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kemmyb 2 years ago

It was fun to write from an inanimate object's point of view.

Yes and brilliant too. I wonder why I never thought of something like that! 😄 It's a lovely story with life lessons.

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youarealive 2 years ago

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