All Comes Down To Where We Stand or Sit | Based on 2 September @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2148 | Prompt: velvet couch (sofá de terciopelo) [Eng/Esp]

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"Stop it! We can't afford that." Riley's shrill voice sent a piercing chill up Evangie's spine. Describing the layout of the living room, she paused, then slowly stood upright and turned toward her husband of five years, tilting her head, then looking intently into his eyes.

She pursed her lips and started in an amusing, but uncertain tone. "Why? It's only been six months living with no living room furniture. Besides, it costs less than a thousand dollars."

"That's not the point. The money saved is for next month's rent. You're acting like we're rich." He turned away from her. his hands grasping his neck while shaking his head. "This is not working for me."

Evangie would have collapsed into the small chair nearby the window had it not been for her protruding stomach.

Last month, Riley enthusiastically endorsed her plans to move ahead with furnishing their new home. What her husband was saying now didn't line up with what she expected. It definitely didn't mesh with her understanding of their financial agreement. She jerked her head, then put up her hands spread wide.

"How did the conversation turn from objecting to a furniture purchase to our marriage not working for you? It's just a couch set. A beautiful, red velvet one at that!"

Sensing a total lack of understanding in what he was not saying, Riley strode over to the sofa table and grabbed his keys.

Evangie watched with shock on her face as he looked back once more before slamming the door.

Just like that, he was gone. No goodbye. No explanation. No indication of when he would return.

Perplexed, she eased into the bedroom. Lying down on her back, staring at the wall. In two months we will be parents. Should be a joyous occasion; not squabbling over living room furniture.

That man was not my husband who spoke to me in that nasty tone, she thought silently.

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Thirty minutes later, Riley sat staring out over the small pond. On other occasions, he would return to his car to retrieve a packaged cracker. But he couldn't bring himself to feed the birds.

Instead, he tossed rocks so that the ripples could reveal how he probably talked himself out of a job two weeks ago. And possibly a beautiful, supportive marriage only an hour ago.

It seems I'm headed toward a life of isolation, he reasoned as he remembered the turbulent situation that infuriated his supervisor six months ago.

"You just can't keep your mouth shut! Everyone knows that you can't contradict the supervisor. That is, unless you've got your resume ready." Leon grabbed Riley's arm.

Riley flinched. But his complaint was already filed. Looking for his team to support him, he realized Leon and others were reluctant to come forward. Their families and livelihood were at stake.

Riley didn't believe that management would take the side of an incompetent middle man over his expertise in the industry. His immediate supervisor was an outsider who knew nothing of the specialized work he supervised. Hiring an immediate family member who was not educated in the specific classifications required to do the company's business was not best practices to uphold the integrity of the company.

But the truth was bound to appear down the line; a leak, an explosion and disruption of a company's business; fatalities, and untold other disasters that could occur.

To de-escalate a person's objections to the negative work environment was beyond the scope of the supervisor's duties and authority. His actions bordered on a cover up of another employee's quality assurance during the inspection phase.

The supervisor's solution. A reduction in work force. Since Riley was new to the department, his name was placed on the list.

Riley had accepted a position into management the year before. Buying new outfits, he instructed his wife to fold away his uniform. His first encounter with corporate politics. And, a distasteful dose of reality.

Finished skipping rocks, he returned to his car. Reaching into the middle compartment, he pulled out the termination notice. Blinding tears dripped onto the paper as the mounting bills from his wife's upcoming hospital stay during delivery flashed before his face. Neither was furnishing their home the wise choice to undertake with no job.

Butting his head against the backrest, he folded away the notice. Angry words at Evangie was not the answer. He needed his wife's support. She would always be his rock.

What Riley didn't know was that while Evengie rested, she engrossed herself in some soul searching. No, that was not her husband who spoke to her in that negative tone. She would drop her dream of a red velvet couch. Obviously money was an issue she didn't know about.

Distance was not an object she let lay between them for too long. She waited for his return and met him at the door.

Guiding him into the bedroom while holding his hand, they sat on its edge. "Whatever happened to bring on the objection to the furniture, I need to know right now. Start from the beginning. I've noticed that you have been preoccupied these past few months. I was under the impression it was adjusting to a new phase of management position."

Just as Riley was about to tell of his anguish over the past six months, the phone rang. The regional manager of their company's Internal Affairs. Riley listened intently. Hope rose up as his complaint was escalated.

Turned out, Leon and two other co-workers in his department, registered separate complaints, validating Riley's original submission. None of the employees would be fired under the whistle blower regulations. And, the supervisor would be reprimanded and dealt with according to company policies.

Riley returned to Evangie. "Unpack my uniform." Riley looked into her eyes.

"Are you sure you want to level down your career?" She searched his face in earnest.

"I'll keep my integrity." Riley smiled and pulled his wife close as they discussed their future plans to downsize, purchase velvet couch, and complete their son's nursery.

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"¡Basta! No podemos permitírnoslo". La voz chillona de Riley hizo que a Evangie le recorriera un escalofrío punzante por la espalda. Describiendo la distribución del salón, hizo una pausa, luego se irguió lentamente y se volvió hacia su marido desde hacía cinco años, ladeando la cabeza y mirándole fijamente a los ojos.

Frunció los labios y empezó con un tono divertido, pero inseguro. "¿Por qué? Sólo llevamos seis meses viviendo sin muebles de salón. Además, cuesta menos de mil dólares".

"Ésa no es la cuestión. El dinero ahorrado es para el alquiler del mes que viene. Actúas como si fuéramos ricos". Se apartó de ella. Sus manos agarrándose el cuello mientras negaba con la cabeza. "Esto no me sirve".

Evangie se habría desplomado en la pequeña silla cercana a la ventana de no ser por su prominente estómago.

El mes pasado, Riley apoyó con entusiasmo sus planes de seguir adelante con el amueblamiento de su nuevo hogar. Lo que su marido decía ahora no encajaba con lo que ella esperaba. Definitivamente no encajaba con lo que ella entendía de su acuerdo financiero. Sacudió la cabeza y levantó las manos.

"¿Cómo ha pasado la conversación de objetar a la compra de un mueble a que nuestro matrimonio no funcione para ti? Es sólo un sofá. Un hermoso sofá de terciopelo rojo".

Sintiendo una total falta de comprensión en lo que no estaba diciendo, Riley se acercó a la mesa del sofá y cogió sus llaves.

Evangie vio con asombro cómo él miraba hacia atrás una vez más antes de salir dando un portazo.

Sin más, se había ido. Sin despedirse. Sin explicaciones. Ninguna indicación de cuándo volvería.

Perpleja, entró en el dormitorio. Se tumbó boca arriba, mirando la pared. En dos meses seremos padres. Debería ser una ocasión feliz, no una disputa por los muebles del salón.

Ese hombre que me habló en ese tono tan desagradable no era mi marido, pensó en silencio.

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Treinta minutos después, Riley estaba sentado mirando el pequeño estanque. En otras ocasiones, volvía a su coche para coger una galleta empaquetada. Pero no se atrevía a dar de comer a los pájaros.

En lugar de eso, lanzaba piedras para que las ondas revelaran que hacía dos semanas probablemente se había convencido a sí mismo de que no tenía trabajo. Y posiblemente de un matrimonio hermoso y solidario hace sólo una hora.

Parece que me encamino hacia una vida de aislamiento, razonó al recordar la turbulenta situación que enfureció a su supervisor hace seis meses.

"¡No puedes tener la boca cerrada! Todo el mundo sabe que no se puede contradecir al supervisor. Es decir, a menos que tengas preparado tu currículum". Leon agarró a Riley del brazo.

Riley se estremeció. Pero su queja ya estaba archivada. Buscando el apoyo de su equipo, se dio cuenta de que Leon y los demás eran reacios a presentarse. Sus familias y sus medios de vida estaban en juego.

Riley no creía que la dirección se pusiera de parte de un intermediario incompetente en lugar de su experiencia en el sector. Su supervisor inmediato era un extraño que no sabía nada del trabajo especializado que supervisaba. Contratar a un familiar directo que no estaba formado en las clasificaciones específicas necesarias para el negocio de la empresa no era la mejor práctica para mantener la integridad de la empresa.

Pero la verdad estaba destinada a aparecer más adelante; una fuga, una explosión y la interrupción de los negocios de una empresa; víctimas mortales, e innumerables otros desastres que podrían ocurrir.

Reducir las objeciones de una persona al ambiente de trabajo negativo iba más allá de las funciones y la autoridad del supervisor. Sus acciones rozaban el encubrimiento de la garantía de calidad de otro empleado durante la fase de inspección.

La solución del supervisor. Una reducción de plantilla. Como Riley era nuevo en el departamento, su nombre se incluyó en la lista.

Riley había aceptado un puesto en la dirección el año anterior. Comprándose ropa nueva, dio instrucciones a su mujer para que doblara su uniforme. Su primer encuentro con la política corporativa. Y, una desagradable dosis de realidad.

Después de saltar las piedras, volvió a su coche. Metió la mano en el compartimento central y sacó la carta de despido. Unas lágrimas cegadoras gotearon sobre el papel mientras las crecientes facturas de la próxima estancia de su mujer en el hospital durante el parto pasaban por su cara. Tampoco amueblar su casa era una decisión inteligente si no tenía trabajo.

Apoyó la cabeza en el respaldo y dobló el papel. Enfadarse con Evangie no era la solución. Necesitaba el apoyo de su mujer. Ella siempre sería su roca.

Lo que Riley no sabía era que, mientras Evengie descansaba, se enfrascaba en un examen de conciencia. No, no era su marido quien le hablaba en ese tono negativo. Ella abandonaría su sueño de un sofá de terciopelo rojo. Obviamente el dinero era un tema que ella desconocía.

La distancia no era un objeto que ella dejara interponerse entre ellos durante demasiado tiempo. Esperó a que volviera y se reunió con él en la puerta.

Le guió hasta el dormitorio y, cogiéndole de la mano, se sentaron en el borde. "Sea lo que sea lo que ha pasado para que te opongas a los muebles, necesito saberlo ahora mismo. Empieza por el principio. He notado que has estado preocupado estos últimos meses. Tenía la impresión de que se estaba adaptando a una nueva fase del puesto directivo."

Justo cuando Riley estaba a punto de contar sus angustias de los últimos seis meses, sonó el teléfono. Era el director regional de Asuntos Internos de su empresa. Riley escuchó atentamente. La esperanza surgió a medida que su queja se intensificaba.

Resultó que Leon y otros dos compañeros de su departamento, registraron quejas separadas, validando la presentación original de Riley. Ninguno de los empleados sería despedido en virtud de la normativa de denuncia de irregularidades. Y, el supervisor sería amonestado y tratado de acuerdo con las políticas de la empresa.

Riley volvió a Evangie. "Deshaz la maleta de mi uniforme". Riley la miró a los ojos.

"¿Estás segura de que quieres rebajar el nivel de tu carrera?". Ella buscó su rostro con seriedad.

"Mantendré mi integridad". Riley sonrió y acercó a su mujer mientras hablaban de sus planes futuros de reducir el tamaño, comprar un sofá de terciopelo y completar la habitación infantil de su hijo.

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What a lovely story! 😊 I worried at first when Riley walked out of the house to the pond. Financial strains and miscommunication are some issues that shake up marriages. Another thing is secrecy. If Riley had not kept his wife in the dark, they wouldn't be having the disagreement over the furnishing and purchase of the couch.

The dialogue between the couple and their emotions are well-crafted. I rooted for their story to have a happy ending and I'm glad it did. Riley is a tough nut and stands up for what he believes is right even in the face of potential consequences. He's not meant for corporate/management politics and risks. Prioritizing his family by returning to his former job shows his courage. Beautifully written as always! Take care and have a wonderful day. !PIMP !LADY 💕


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Thanks so much @kemmyb for visiting and leaving your kind compliment for my story. I'm pleased you liked how the tense situation resolved itself. Indeed, miscommunication, secrecy, and financial worries place a tremendous strain on any relationship.

Normally, when couples become embroiled in an argument, it is never fully about the topic at hand. Underlying pressures and often external issues are at play. What comes out of one's mouth is just venting over the frustrating situation.

I was hoping that in my attempt to keep the dialogue at a minimum, that the confusion would be allowed to surface for the contention in the relationship until they worked it out and Riley realized what he needed to resolve his dilemma. Excellent choice he made on his future when knowing his strengths and weaknesses.

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That is just about the happiest ending I have ever read!

Thanks so much for the lovely words. I appreciate it and am pleased you liked how Riley worked through his issues that so that he could share with his wife the real reason he objected to purchasing the velvet couch. Rarely does a couple's arguments reflect the true underlying subject matter. Communication is the key. For those who work it out, happy endings are a blessing.

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The joy of meeting after such a long time cannot be estimated, only those who spend a number of years away from their loved ones can. Every person wants to buy the best things for his home and for his people, but it is not possible to get all the things at once, for all these things we have to patient.

You are correct @djbravo. One cannot realistically achieve all their decorating goals at once if they are not financially able to do so. They must communicate with each other and come to an agreeable compromise if they are to move forward together.

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