i loved the way you foreshadowed Julianne's fate in the beginning of the story. The mention of the black van and the dark tinted windows made me feel uneasy, and I knew that something bad was going to happen.
The ending was also very well-done. It was a bit sad, but it was also realistic. I think it's important to show the consequences of making bad decisions, and this story did that very well.
Hello @malos10. You are spot on when you say the danger was there. The young lady chose to overlook it. First off, meeting someone online is a huge risk. Second, I feel the location he wanted her to meet with him was suspect. She ignored all the warnings, even from her parents.
I have heard so many sad stories of young ladies being taken advantage of this way. The endings are overwhelmingly sad.
Thanks so much for your visit and kind compliment. I'm pleased you liked my story, although a sad one. I appreciate your support and engagement.
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