RE: The Breakup | Mariannewest's Freewriting Writing Prompt (Day 1941) | Prompt: brandy (coñac) [Eng/Esp]

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malos10 in CCH • 10 months ago

Wow, that was a gripping story! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I felt Jeremy's fear and desperation as he tried to outrun the avalanche, and I was heartbroken when he realized that Brandy had never loved him.

The writing was excellent. You did a great job of creating a sense of urgency and suspense. The dialogue was natural and believable, and the descriptions were vivid.

I especially liked the way you ended the story. It was a powerful and unexpected twist that left me feeling shaken.

10 months ago in CCH by malos10

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justclickindiva 10 months ago

Hello @malos10. Thank you so much for visiting. I appreciate your kind compliment. I'm pleased you liked the progression of my story from beginning to end. My aim is to always build tension and disclose characters' strengths and weaknesses.

Yes, Jeremy experienced an urgency when he realized his life would probably end. But finding out the love of his life didn't return his feelings was devastating. It's not often one wants to give up on life.

In the end, he felt he made the best choice for his life.

I appreciate your support of my story. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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