RE: It's All About the Color | 12 September @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2158 | Prompt: friendly snake (serpiente amistosa) [Eng/Esp]

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RE: It's All About the Color | 12 September @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2158 | Prompt: friendly snake (serpiente amistosa) [Eng/Esp]

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kemmyb in CCH • 8 months ago

Whoa! That was intense. You are good at building tension and suspense. At first, I thought Matthew was having a bad dream because he saw the snake, went back to bed and did nothing about it. Dozier is an ever-loyal friend and helps his master the best way he can.

The question Monica asks Matthew at the end gives me the impression that there's some symbolism attached to the snake's colour or does it have to do with knowing how poisonous it is? A very intriguing story. I enjoyed reading. 😊Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day. !PIMP !LADY 💕

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justclickindiva 8 months ago

Hello @kemmyb. Thanks so much for your visit and kind compliment for my story. I'm pleased to be able to effectively build tension in my scenes leading up to Matthew's encounter with whatever he dreamed or experienced. Only he knows what truly happened that night.

Knowing the reptile escaped nearby could induce negative emotions.

Symbolism is also at work here as well as the color combination that indicates whether the reptile is dangerous. Dreaming about snakes can indicate a toxic person in one's life or a healing and/or positive sequence of events are about to occur.

I appreciate your thoughtful analysis of my story. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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