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RE: Brain Fry - (Short Story, Based on a Nightmare)

in #steempeak5 years ago

I like this, some cool details and I really like the idea of microwaving people. Can't say I am a big fan of ending it with "and then I woke up", even if it actually was a dream you had!

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I'm sorry you didn't like the ending :(

It actually was a dream I had before waking up this morning, and that is how it ended :(

Please don't microwave people, it's not a good idea! 😂

I had a very vivid dream when I was a teenager, that I've written out here before.
It ended the same way, I just woke up, only I was crying for real when I awoke

Yes, this was quite disturbing, and I didn't really find it funny at all, (I was barely awake writing it too, because I wanted to ensure I didn't forget any details after waking fully) but I don't mind if other people do. Oh well, I do my best to convey things how they are to me, if the legitimacy is to be questioned, then I can only perceive that as projection of another's emotions, and not personal.

yeah I caught that it was actually a dream. Just ending it with "and then I woke up" is such a cliche even if in this case it actually was what happened LOL

Lol, yeah I guess you're right, it is pretty cliche.

Thank you :)