Your story reminds me of this animation movie, titled 'Toy Story'😅.
Wonderful story! It was well written and it captured my attention right from beginning because I was curious as who Jack is. I don't know, but I find myself sympathizing with Jack's struggles and lack for attention.
I was scared for Jimmy's family when Jack stood over them. My heart stopped a while there. I enjoyed reading your story, it was interesting and pack with tension.
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