RE: Death Of A Dream | LMAC Collage - FreeStyle No. 48

You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Death Of A Dream | LMAC Collage - FreeStyle No. 48

View the full context

kemmyb in Let's Make a Collage • 9 months ago

What a fascinating piece. You delicately capture the turbulence of emotions and the fragile nature of relationships. I'm not sure but I suspect Bethany and Lukyan are not humans. Some kind of creature?

Bethany and Lukyan's relationship is a passionate but complicated one. I can infer that Bethany's feelings towards Lukyan are intense but she's frustrated somewhat due to deception and doubt. But does Lukyan love her in return? And why does he strike Bethany leading her to succumb to death? I think she gave up too easily but anyone can make such a decision due to emotional turmoil and unfulfilled desires or dreams.

Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Take care. !LUV

9 months ago in Let's Make a Collage by kemmyb

0.00 BPC

2 votes

Sort:

Trending

[-]

justclickindiva 9 months ago

Thanks so much @kemmyb for your lovely compliment for my poem. I'm pleased you liked my project and prose.

Yes, Bethany and Lukyan had a complicated relationship, which I feel was entered into hastily and not given time to know each other. She was more attached than he was. His indifference grew as he got to know her personality. And he didn't like it at all. What he did to lure her to edge of the shoreline on a promise of elopement, then leave her was surely agonizing. It probably caught her by surprise. Love does that to people. Their loving eyes can not see.

She suffered emotional turmoil upon discovering his deceit. Hopefully, her family can reach her in time once they discover her missing. But did she leave clues as to where she was going. Often too late, people realize their mistakes and hope for salvation. It's a massive burden to put on anyone, especially family, to try to figure out one's romantic entanglements and emotional state of mind.

I appreciate your visit and support. Take care.

!ALIVE

0.00 BPC

1 vote

[-]

youarealive 9 months ago

@kemmyb! You Are Alive so I just staked 0.1 $ALIVE to your account on behalf of @ justclickindiva. _(3/10)

The tip has been paid for by the We Are Alive Tribe through the earnings on @alive.chat, feel free to swing by our daily chat any time you want, plus you can win Hive Power (2x 50 HP) and Alive Power (2x 500 AP) delegations (4 weeks), and Ecency Points (4x 50 EP), in our chat every day.

0.00 BPC

[-]

luvshares 9 months ago

Join in Hive General chat | Type ! help (no space) to get help on Hive. Info

Made with LUV by crrdlx

0.00 BPC