Hello @deking01. Thanks for visiting and your kind compliment. I'm pleased you like my collage and short story. I try to be as descriptive as I can so that my readers can see the peacefulness of the resort. Then try to imagine a sea creature.
In terms of writing, just keep practicing all types. I love fiction. You can practice in the writing communities, such as Freewriters by participating in their various writing prompts.
Take care and have a good rest of your week.
!ALIVE
You're welcome. That descriptive style of writing really captured my mind as I reflect on every detail you have provided. I must commend your attention to detail in your freewrite story; it's highly remarkable. Okay, thanks! This is duly noted. Thanks, and I wish you the same. 😊
Try it sometimes including the senses and how they make you feel. The description of them will make your story come alive.
Take care.
!ALIVE
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