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RE: Where Are You Going? | Doppley | Oivas | Short Story

in OCD4 years ago

Beautiful ending. I was sure it was all over between them and she was callous so he should have moved on. People do sometimes tend to act put offish when they are not sure and don't know how to express that. It certainly could have turned out a lot different and she could have lost the love of her life.

Thanks for your wonderful ending to the partner. You both had a story that happens in everyday life.

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Thank you @justclickindiva! Yeah, I was trying to go for a happy ending considering that would contrast the first part altogether. The good part was that I could carry it forward from @doppley's fantastic start.

Thank you so much for stopping by! :)