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RE: A Worthwhile Life (an original poetry) + Random Talk about Life

in Awakening Poetry3 years ago

Hello there dear friend!
Its been a while, glad to read from you today.
You know when they say that a person with obstacles and challenges in life know how well to deal and handle situations when they arises.
Your poem depicts a person who is trying to find his or her balance even when life has hit him or her in so many way.
I like the rhymes in each lines.
Well, that makes us two selfish person lol. In my case I don't think I am selfish but just scared of making mistakes.