Hi @venom2951. This is an enjoyable story. We have a tip for you. In this story, you change perspective from "first person" (yourself) to "third person" (Obinna). It is much better to choose one or the other and stick with it through an entire story.

For example, since Obinna is the name of the main character who is discovering the benefits of the library through his friend, Nkem, everything in the story should be told from his perspective, if you are writing the story in the third person. In the following example, the second line should be "Finally, he found his spot."

Obinna didn't realize that Nkem had left three hours ago.
Finally, I found my spot.
He left the library so happy and was already planning how he would spend the next day from morning to night at the library.

We hope this is helpful.