Hello @nancybriti1 :-) A small point about your opening paragraph in this piece: You mention "jumping over the stones" but also walking "carefully and nervously, like a trapeze artist across a tightrope, hoping not to fall". The act of jumping does not feel as though it matches the image created in this second description. Perhaps a little reworking of this is needed so that it doesn't feel paradoxical. I hope you find this comment helpful. Happy Thursday.