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RE: Reach for Me

in Blockchain Poets25 days ago

You really inspire me with your contents @tarazkp, sometimes they make me laugh, other times, just helps me reflect.

And now, here you go again with yet another beautiful piece, it sure sounded like an organized rhyming rap that's accompanied by a really cool chorus, to me. I actually started humming the rhyming lyrics in my mind as I read through this unique poem. I especially appreciate this lines:

"Reach for me, don't preach to me,
Teach to me, don't leech from me,
Raise me, don't beat on me,
Praise me, don't feed on me.
Reach for me."

I sense a longing to be heard, understood, and loved. It kinda sounds sad and depressing. like tears droppings to actually form the ink used in writing the words of this poem.

This is really relatable and unique. Thanks for being here.😊

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I see it as a kind of song also. Not sure how it would rap, but maybe :)

The rap version will definitely work just fine, the poem is so unique that the lyrics can rhyme without stress or even more composition.
Thanks a lot @tarazkp for having such great mind of composing such beautiful poem as that one.

Have a beautiful day ahead.
Cheers 🥂