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RE: Transit Stop No. 9 | Mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2100 | Prompt: what's your question (¿cuál es su pregunta?)

in Freewriters2 years ago

I can see that Oliver has a kind of deep connection with her. Even when she disappeared, he later went to her after getting down from the bus
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Yes, Oliver was attracted to the young lady from the bus. Unfortunate circumstances kept them apart. I hope he is able to return her mobile phone and explain what happened, and that she is not too upset.

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