What a thrilling and suspenseful story! You built the tension and danger perfectly that I feared Veronica and Jeremy might not survive. Thanks to Jeremy's determination and bravery, they made it!
The vivid descriptions of the reptilian creature and the fight scene is gripping. Beautifully written! Take care and have a lovely weekend. 😊 !LADY
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So pleased @kemmyb that you stopped by for an insightful visit. I look forward to your in-depth and thoughtful engagement on my stories. I'm happy to hear you found Jeremy and Veronica's outing suspenseful. They probably never expected to encounter a murderous reptile on a lovely bird watching venture. I'm sure Veronica will have an unusual thesis...and a new relationship perhaps.
You know one thing I wanted to instill in my story that is that individuals don't realize their inner strength until it's called up for duty. Some flight, while others decide to remain and fight. Whatever the choice, the ones that take flight do so with all their ability. The ones who fight do the same.
I'm happy to hear that my attempt at providing my readers all the action that I see comes though with my descriptions. Thanks for exposing that.
I appreciate your support always. Take care and have a good weekend.
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