Time Lapse - A ZapFic 250-Word MicroFiction Story | Based on @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2198 | Prompt: a little nap

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MicroFiction: A 250 word story written using the word prompt "a little nap".

...When I think of the prompt "a little nap", I'm reminded of the power naps I take frequently that aid in my recovery from a headache or just malaise. For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of 23 October @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2198: a little nap.

Below is my story:

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The sun peeked through the sheer curtains as Sibyl's morning dawned.
Another day woken by the grace of God's touch.
Only three scores and ten are promised, she thought.
Eighty years was a gift.

The beginning of another week, bringing her closer to this year's end.
Looking over at her spouse resting peacefully in his snoring position,
sharing softly a familiar tune, she smiled,
remembering their recent 50th wedding anniversary celebration.

A lightning bolt streaked up the back of her neck.
Increasing in intensity, she shuttered, her hands caressing her head.
Another migraine. She lay still, promising to call the doctor on Monday.

Eyes blurry, the room swayed as a ton of bricks weighed heavily, banging her head.
Her arm fell listless attempting to move it toward her husband.
Her mouth twisted to one side.

Maury, she cried silently, I need your help. Please wake up!
Immediately, her dinner threatened to rush back and fill her mouth.

But Maury continued on in his song, drowning out her distress.

I won't get up. Just a bit of stress, Sybil reasoned.
A little nap is all that's needed.
The week taxed her helping to care for Maury.
She hadn't been feeling well lately.
And the home health care worker wasn't scheduled on Sunday.

Daylight Savings ended. She gasped at forgetting to turn back the clocks.
The only chance one hour out of one day of the year to relive your life.

Sibyl reached for the comforter and pulled it over her head.

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The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 250 words to create my ZapFic250 story for Day 2198.

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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What a poignant prose that dwells on the impact of time. I sometimes quarrel with time in my head because of its power over the universe. I feel the vulnerability of Sibyl—from a sense of nostalgia to a health crisis right beside her husband and he did not know! This shows life is unpredictable and with the daylight savings metaphor, we should cherish every moment.

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She indeed needs the nap to recuperate her aged bones.

Nothing beats a power nap after a hard Day's or week's work

It certainly does help to take a power nap. I take them frequently to refresh, even if no longer than an hour.

I appreciate you stopping by. Take care and have a good rest of your week.
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You too

That's awesome
She was really stresses in the story and she gotta rest

Yes, the wife is stressed and having medical issues. She does decide to return to bed and take a nap beside her snoring spouse.

Thanks for your visit. Take care.
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