The Inheritance | @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2094 | Prompt: don't shake it (no lo agites)

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From the road, Holly stood with her hands on her car's roof surveying the exterior of the home. Forty years had passed. She shook off the nagging feelings. Today was not the appropriate time for self-recrimination. Purchasing the home was a noble act that should have occurred decades ago. Someone had to step forward, she told herself. For the family's inheritance. The struggles during a long ago era that disallowed their home ownership.

Stopping by on her way to the nearby hotel, Holly wanted to take a quick look before returning the left day.

In the dwindling glow of the evening's sunlight, the outside looked as well as felt abandoned. Now dilapidated. A former shadow of the grand mansion. Brown and black streaks signified years of disrepair.

It was one thing to buy a home without inspection. But she already knew its history. She lived it. The once elegant, two-story, Southern style home with tall, white columns, a portico, plantation style shutters, and a lush manicured landscape.

Holly, followed by Franz, her husband of five years, opted to leave the car on the paved section of the road. No need to become bogged down in the crooked path's red soil leading toward the house. One of many upgrades needing attention.

The door creaked open. Musk, culminated with foul odors, greeted Holly. Evidence of rot on the main floor simulated decay encountered outside. Trash littered the entryway and the primary sitting room.

Franze cleared a path to the bay window.

Childhood memories brought tears to Holly's eyes as she followed the familiar path to the lowest limb of the large oak tree. She gasp as she'd done hundreds of times, feeling the wind rush to her face as she sailed through the warm summer air, bringing the smell of honeysuckle from the nearby shrubs.

Immediately, she turned away, removed a handkerchief form her purse, and wiped her face.

Unafraid, she headed toward the second floor. "I wouldn't risk those stairs." Franz grabbed her arm. She brushed off his hand and continued. Keeping in mind his warning, she stepped gingerly, landing on the stable side of each.

Turning back toward him, she warned, "it will be fine. The railing is rotten. Don't shake it."

Franz flashed the weak floodlight beyond her face. Flickering at intervals, it captured small, dark figures lying in their path at the top of the staircase. She jerked a sharp breath as her hands flew to her mouth.

Holly let escape a low, shaky laugh. The flashlight revealed numerous stuffed animals. Although worn and dirty, she recognized several.

"This house could use some serious repair and upgrades. How old is it?" Franz would have left without investigating further.

"Built by my great grandfather in the early 30s." Before Holly could continue, a loud crash interrupted her thoughts.

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Franz moved in front to shield his wife. Pulling out his concealed weapon, he yelled, "who's there? I'm the owner of the home, and I'm prepared to defend it!"

No further movement. Only silence.

Holly caught the faint smell of turpentine. Franz yelled again his question. This time, music answered as it floated from under the door toward them.

Her maternal, great grandmother's room. The sounds drew them closer. They continued carefully down the hall avoiding additional debris. Either vagrants or animals. The only explanation.

Franz flung open the door. It fell off its hinges.

Startled, the man turned, then jumped up from the floor, knocking over a pan. The smell of turpentine filled the air as paint brushes lined a wall stripped of wallpaper.

Pulling out earplugs, he stammered, "hi, my name is Philip Monroe. My family was once owners of this home. I meant no disrespect."

"Cousin Philip?" Holly questioned loudly, even though the man had removed the earplugs. A family portrait book with names identifying each person underneath covered Holly's face as she compared the middle aged man standing before her with his younger self.

Holly's eyes grew wide. Over fifty years since she'd spoken to him. According to family gossip, he had moved, settling somewhere in Europe.

"What are you doing here?" Holly eyed her second cousin from head to toe. In painter's overalls with paint on his face, she barely recognized him.

"Long story. The evening light is fading. Let's talk at my hotel." His accent was clear.

Philip opened the door to Holly and Franz. Holly jokingly commented how different was his appearance away from the home.

"Please sit. May I offer you a drink while I explain." Philip was a gracious host in his hotel suite.

"First, it was our paternal side of the family that lost custody of our ancestral home. Non-payment of taxes. No estate plan led to infighting. Numerous liens were attached upon foreclosure. A shame on our...I mean my family's part."

Holly considered his points. All fault shouldn't be laid at his feet.

"Don't blame yourself. I've seen this happen when elders refuse to share the extent of financial difficulties. Or, children don't inquire. I'm much at fault as any other family member. Forty beautiful acres difficult to acquire during that time period were lost." Her voice trailed off.

Franz sat quietly and listened as Holly and Philip reminisced over their childhood fun at the estate. He then shared photos of his family.

With tears in his eyes, he continued. "I loved that swing during my time. You don't know how elated I was when you showed up at the estate and learned you had purchased it. I lodged an offer, but it was rejected. Researching the buyer was difficult. Your married name. I remembered a younger cousin "Holly" in the family, though. But your given name, Holandria, threw me off.

"I loved that swing, also. And No, it's the collective family's fault for not paying attention to our inheritance. Each generation is removed slightly from their ancestry."

"Would you consider a partnership? I know one other person on my side of the family who would love to contribute." Philip could already see the possibilities of bringing the home back central to the entire family.

"Restoration will probably take more than a year. We have time as I would have to meet everyone involved to ensure they're like minded. A family gathering would be the perfect time to discuss this."

Splitting the costs of restoration. The idea gained traction. Holly listened as Philip elaborated on the positive aspects.

One thought rose up and occupied her present. The inheritance for future generations of the family.

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For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2094: don’t shake it!.

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Desde la carretera, Holly observaba el exterior de la casa con las manos apoyadas en el techo del coche. Habían pasado cuarenta años. Se sacudió los sentimientos persistentes. Hoy no era el momento adecuado para la autocrítica. La compra de la casa fue un acto noble que debería haber ocurrido hace décadas. Alguien tenía que dar un paso adelante, se dijo a sí misma. Por la herencia familiar. Las luchas durante una época lejana que les impidió ser propietarios de una vivienda.

Al pasar por allí de camino al hotel cercano, Holly quiso echar un vistazo rápido antes de volver el día de la izquierda.

En el resplandor menguante de la luz del sol de la tarde, el exterior parecía abandonado. Ahora en ruinas. Una antigua sombra de la gran mansión. Las vetas marrones y negras indicaban años de deterioro.

Una cosa era comprar una casa sin inspeccionarla. Pero ella ya conocía su historia. La había vivido. La que fuera una elegante casa de dos plantas de estilo sureño, con altas columnas blancas, un pórtico, contraventanas estilo plantación y un exuberante y cuidado paisaje.

Holly, seguida de Franz, su marido desde hacía cinco años, optó por dejar el coche en el tramo asfaltado de la carretera. No había necesidad de empantanarse en la tierra roja del camino torcido que conducía hacia la casa. Una de las muchas mejoras que necesitaban atención.

La puerta crujió al abrirse. Almizcle, culminado con olores fétidos, saludó a Holly. Evidencias de podredumbre en el piso principal simulaban la decadencia encontrada en el exterior. La entrada y el salón principal estaban llenos de basura.

Franze se abrió paso hasta el ventanal.

Los recuerdos de la infancia hicieron que a Holly se le llenaran los ojos de lágrimas mientras seguía el camino familiar hasta la rama más baja del gran roble. Jadeó como lo había hecho cientos de veces, sintiendo cómo el viento le llegaba a la cara mientras navegaba por el cálido aire veraniego, trayéndole el olor a madreselva de los arbustos cercanos.

Inmediatamente se dio la vuelta, sacó un pañuelo de su bolso y se secó la cara.

Sin miedo, se dirigió al segundo piso. "Yo no me arriesgaría por esas escaleras". Franz la agarró del brazo. Ella se quitó la mano de encima y continuó. Teniendo en cuenta su advertencia, pisó con cuidado y aterrizó en el lado estable de cada escalera.

Volviéndose hacia él, le advirtió: *"No pasará nada. La barandilla está podrida. **No la sacudas".

Franz encendió el débil foco más allá de su cara. Parpadeando a intervalos, captó pequeñas figuras oscuras que se interponían en su camino en lo alto de la escalera. Ella soltó un fuerte suspiro y se llevó las manos a la boca.

Holly dejó escapar una risa baja y temblorosa. La linterna reveló numerosos peluches. Aunque desgastados y sucios, reconoció varios.

"A esta casa le vendrían bien algunas reparaciones y mejoras. ¿Cuántos años tiene?" Franz se habría marchado sin investigar más.

"La construyó mi bisabuelo a principios de los años 30". Antes de que Holly pudiera continuar, un fuerte estruendo interrumpió sus pensamientos.

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Franz se puso delante para proteger a su mujer. Sacando su arma oculta, gritó: "¿Quién anda ahí? Soy el dueño de la casa y estoy dispuesto a defenderla".

No hubo más movimientos. Sólo silencio.

Holly percibió un ligero olor a trementina. Franz volvió a gritar su pregunta. Esta vez, la música respondió mientras flotaba desde debajo de la puerta hacia ellos.

La habitación de su bisabuela materna. Los sonidos los acercaron. Continuaron con cuidado por el pasillo evitando más escombros. O vagabundos o animales. La única explicación.

Franz abrió la puerta de golpe. Se cayó de sus goznes.

Sobresaltado, el hombre se dio la vuelta y se levantó del suelo de un salto, derribando una sartén. El olor a trementina llenaba el aire mientras los pinceles se alineaban en una pared desprovista de papel pintado.

Sacándose tapones para los oídos, balbuceó: "Hola, me llamo Philip Monroe. Mi familia fue propietaria de esta casa. No pretendía faltarle al respeto".

"¿Primo Philip? ", preguntó Holly en voz alta, a pesar de que el hombre se había quitado los tapones. Un libro de retratos familiares con los nombres que identificaban a cada persona debajo cubría la cara de Holly mientras comparaba al hombre de mediana edad que tenía delante con su yo más joven.

Los ojos de Holly se abrieron de par en par. Hacía más de cincuenta años que no hablaba con él. Según las habladurías familiares, se había mudado, estableciéndose en algún lugar de Europa.

Holly miró a su primo segundo de pies a cabeza. Con un mono de pintor y la cara pintada, apenas lo reconoció."

"Una larga historia. La luz del atardecer se está desvaneciendo. Hablemos en mi hotel". Su acento era claro.

Philip abrió la puerta a Holly y Franz. Holly comentó en broma lo diferente que era su aspecto fuera de casa.

"Siéntense, por favor. Les ofrezco una copa mientras les explico". Philip era un amable anfitrión en su suite del hotel.

"En primer lugar, fue nuestra parte paterna de la familia la que perdió la custodia de nuestra casa ancestral. El impago de impuestos. La ausencia de un plan sucesorio dio lugar a luchas intestinas. Numerosos gravámenes se adjuntaron a la ejecución hipotecaria. Una vergüenza por parte de nuestra... quiero decir, de mi familia".

Holly consideró sus puntos. Toda la culpa no debe ser puesta a sus pies.

"No te culpes. He visto que esto sucede cuando los mayores se niegan a compartir el alcance de las dificultades financieras. O los hijos no preguntan. Soy tan culpable como cualquier otro miembro de la familia. Se perdieron cuarenta hermosos acres difíciles de adquirir en aquella época " Su voz se entrecortó.

Franz se sentó en silencio y escuchó cómo Holly y Philip rememoraban las diversiones de su infancia en la finca. Luego compartió fotos de su familia.

Con lágrimas en los ojos, continuó. "Me encantaba ese columpio de mi época. No sabes cuánto me alegré cuando apareciste en la finca y me enteré de que lo habías comprado. Presenté una oferta, pero fue rechazada. Investigar al comprador fue difícil. Su nombre de casada. Sin embargo, recordé a una prima menor "Holly" en la familia. Pero tu nombre de pila, Holandria, me despistó.

"Me encantó ese swing, también. Y no, es culpa de la familia colectiva por no prestar atención a nuestra herencia. Cada generación se aleja un poco de su ascendencia ".

"¿Considerarías una sociedad? Conozco a otra persona de mi lado de la familia a la que le encantaría contribuir". Philip ya podía ver las posibilidades de devolver el centro de la casa a toda la familia.

"La restauración llevará probablemente más de un año. Tenemos tiempo, ya que tendría que conocer a todos los implicados para asegurarme de que son afines. Una reunión familiar sería el momento perfecto para discutirlo ".

Dividir los costes de la restauración. La idea cobró fuerza. Holly escuchó cómo Philip explicaba los aspectos positivos.

Un pensamiento surgió y ocupó su presente. La herencia para las futuras generaciones de la familia.

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2094: don’t shake it!

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When the minds of each other are meeting, the stories also become easier, the way their minds were meeting.

Yes, Holly and her cousin, Philip, think alike. Let's save the property for our family's future. I'm sure they can convince others to see it there way to. It's much easier to accomplish a huge task with assistance from family.

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Most welcome dear.

Such a nice story
Well, I might have gotten very angry at first if I was Franz
I'm always agitated, lol

Franz would have been angry had it not been that the person inside was a relative of his wife. I was happy that all seemed to have worked out in the end in that the property would be saved for the family's future.

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Wow, it is a good thing Cousin Philip and Holly are already like minds. It'll be nice to bring back their ancestral home.

Yes, it will be the right thing to do. It's hard to find more than a few family members who have the same like-mindedness to cooperate and move toward a common goal. I hope everything works out for them.

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