The Case of Cold Feet - A ZapFic100 Story | Based on @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2018 | Prompt: much warmer (mucho más caliente) [Eng/Esp]

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Drabble: A 100 word story written using the word prompt "much warmer".

...The thought that an item is not to the exact temperature as one would wish can be compared to individuals who are not as friendly, accommodating, or greeting is not as may have been expected. To experience warmness entails a certain familiarity with another upon encountering them. When that feeling is not immediately expressed or exhibited, it can cause the other party to retreat or feel neglected or hurt in some way. I share a micro story in a format of exactly 100 words. This format was created by @felt.buzz.

For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of Day 2018 - 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: much warmer.

Below is my story:

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Amanda and Preston courted for one year.

When it came time to sign the marriage contract, they greeted each other with a stoic nod, while their eyes remained averted.

Amanda, cried silently. His greeting could have been much warmer. Is it cold feet? How am I expected to marry this man whose heart is as cold as the winter storm?

However, she didn't know that her father forbade Preston to touch her until marriage.

Preston cursed. Damn! Cold woman I'm binding myself to.

However, he didn't know that his mother threatened to deny the dowry payment if Amanda touched him.

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Drabble: Una historia de 100 palabras escrita usando la palabra "mucho más caliente".

Pensar que un objeto no está a la temperatura exacta que uno desearía puede compararse a que las personas no sean tan amables, complacientes o que el saludo no sea el esperado. Experimentar calidez implica una cierta familiaridad con el otro al encontrarse con él. Cuando ese sentimiento no se expresa o exhibe inmediatamente, puede hacer que la otra parte se retire o se sienta desatendida o herida de alguna manera. Comparto un microrrelato en un formato de exactamente 100 palabras. Este formato ha sido creado por @felt.buzz.

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de
Day 2018 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: much warmer.

A continuación mi historia.

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El caso de los pies fríos

Amanda y Preston cortejaron durante un año.

Cuando llegó el momento de firmar el contrato matrimonial, se saludaron con un estoico movimiento de cabeza, mientras sus miradas permanecían desviadas.

Amanda, lloraba en silencio. Su saludo podría haber sido mucho más cálido. ¿Es que tengo los pies fríos? ¿Cómo se espera que me case con este hombre cuyo corazón es tan frío como la tormenta de invierno?

Sin embargo, ella no sabía que su padre le había prohibido a Preston tocarla hasta el matrimonio.

Preston maldijo. ¡Maldita sea! Mujer fría a la que me ato.

Sin embargo, no sabía que su madre amenazó con negarle el pago de la dote si Amanda le tocaba.

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The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 100 words to create my ZapFic100.

La captura de pantalla en WORDCOUNTER.net evidencia mi uso de exactamente 100 palabras para crear mi ZapFic100.

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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Deep down in their hearts they both loved each other very much, once they get married the flames of that love will surely burn a lot.

You know @malos10. I truly believed that, but they were restrained from showing their emotions. I hope once they got married, they could just let go and be themselves like yoiu say...let the flames but hot. A lovely wish for the couple after waiting a year!

I appreciate you stopping by and leaving your kind words and support. Take care.

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Such a short story I would like to know what would become of that union. Beautiful piece

They were under a contract of marriage by their parents. Hopefully, once they were married, they connected in the way they should have been allowed to during the year-long betrothal. I feel they both liked each other but were restrained from showing their emotions.

Thanks so much for your visit and kind words. I appreciate them and your support.

Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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