No Rest For The Weary - Based on @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2137 | Prompt: lack of comfort (falta de comodidad) [Eng/Esp]

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Anchored several inches from the shoreline, Mizzello and his friend, Alex, chatted while sipping cocktails and enjoying the amazing chef-prepared dinner onboard Alex's pleasure boat. Several of Alex's companions accompanied them. Earlier in the day, the weather changed and brightened to a pleasant midday shine and breeze cascading over the water. A day to relax and set troubles afloat in the wind's calm, Mizzello thought. But as the weather changed for the better, his mood now soured each second he spent avoiding probing personal questions from Rumondo, one of Alex's companions.

Trying to capture the crowd's various reactions to his answers, Mizzello's eyes darted quickly from one to the other, all while pricking his ears back so as to listen carefully to Rumondo's drilling.

The queries threatened to puncture a hole through Mizzello's polite veneer straight to his past. A past he didn't care to readdress.

Mizzello didn't have to worry. Self-absorbed, the companions failed to observe him quietly place his cocktail on the tray, excuse himself from Rumondo's interrogation, rise from his recliner, and gently take hold of the rope.

Mizzello stood silent for a moment. He then eased to the port side all the while tracing the huge, black vehicle with tinted windows stalking the shoreline. It headed in the direction of their boat. If it hadn't been for the binoculars he'd borrowed, he wouldn't have spotted the men in black suits, black shades, with no names and forgettable faces exit the vehicle.

But Mizzello would never forget. He quietly slipped underneath the deck.

His stomach churned from the wine. Scrambling for his few belongings he'd brought onboard, he haphazardly stuffed them into the small duffel bag.

Back topside, he headed toward the bow. Ensuring his companions were looking out toward the open sea, he eased himself overboard into the shallow water.

Not wanting to cause any commotion, he headed toward the farthest end of the alcove and rested for a second on the sandy shore.

He was now lost in the crowd of beach goers.

Mizzello climbed the steep entry, turned the corner toward the walkway, and walked briskly toward the villa. He didn't pause until the key locked the door from the other side of his suite and closed the drapery.

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He banged his head against the door. Turning around, he slid down to the floor. With his knees up, he squeezed his temples between them until his head throbbed.

He and his partner's small welding business. His mortgage. All gone. Foreclosed upon with his partner's consent. Why did his partner betray him only to be discovered deceased later? And his beautiful wife and adorable son. Missing. He had no evidence to prove to authorities and his own family that he was innocent of any wrongdoing in his business or in his family's disappearance.

He could suffer the loss of his business and partner, but the whereabouts of his family was excruciating.

Mizzello knew that luck was not in his favor after learning his family had turned against him. It was as if his former life was a chapter in one of the numerous mystery novels he favored reading.

He couldn't sit there agonizing. He had to make a move.

Wiping away despair on his sleeve, he dragged himself up. Always careful to used only a certain portion of any room, he canvassing its interior, wiping clean his stay, especially the facility.

Throwing his duffel bag together with the sparse traveling attire into the small suitcase, he started to close, then opened it again. In a small compartment, his finger landed on a family picture and wedding ring. He peeked at both quickly, then shut and locked the luggage. His troubles were real.

Mizzello wiped the key and placed it under the doormat.

Forever vigilant, he rarely relaxed. Pretense became his masterpiece in the company of others. Alone, his surveillance equipment kept him ready from unwanted surprises. Suspicion had to be kept at bay. The private villas afforded blending for individuals with veiled histories. With assistance, he disappeared into the beach tourist scene.

It was a good thing he didn't choose, when offered, the lakefront bungalow available. Hidden among the expensive beachfront rentals on the fourth row provided a small amount of anonymity. He glanced at the rental car parked next to his cabin.

A visitor by invitation, he didn't register with his real name. Hiding among the rich and famous provided an avenue for escape if necessary.

It wasn't from lack of comfort that he now interrupted this particularly enjoyable retreat.

He sighed a temporary breath, then quickly searched the premises from his viewpoint. Within minutes, he was headed south.

While riding the short distance toward town, Mizzello couldn't help but reflect on the possibility of one day locating his family and clearing his reputation.

But the authorities weren't interested in uncovering the truth. His story weaved a tale too implausible to be genuine. It was easier to believe his wife escaped a marriage fraught with insurmountable issues. How any evidence surfaced proving their assertion to authorities was the question that puzzled Mizzello.

No matter how ridiculous, he knew without a doubt that those same men who kidnapped his family were now chasing him. And he had no idea why.

His funds were running low. He didn't know how long he could hold out. But he was committed to discovering the source of this mystery.

Mizzello stood behind the entrance to the station while waiting for the train.

Leaving his friend without a word was bittersweet. But Alex would understand. He'd contact him down the line once he was settled.

It was good to have someone who believed in you that you could depend upon without question.

Mizzello looked back one last time as the train rounded the corner and disappeared through the tunnel.

[to be continued]

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Anclados a varios centímetros de la orilla, Mizzello y su amigo Alex charlaban mientras tomaban cócteles y disfrutaban de la increíble cena preparada por el chef a bordo de la embarcación de recreo de Alex. Varios compañeros de Alex les acompañaban. A primera hora del día, el tiempo cambió y se iluminó con un agradable resplandor de mediodía y una brisa que caía en cascada sobre el agua. Un día para relajarse y dejar los problemas a flote en la calma del viento, pensó Mizzello. Pero a medida que el tiempo cambiaba a mejor, su humor se agriaba cada segundo que pasaba evitando las preguntas personales de Rumondo, uno de los acompañantes de Alex.

Intentando captar las diversas reacciones de la multitud a sus respuestas, los ojos de Mizzello se desviaban rápidamente de uno a otro, al tiempo que aguzaba las orejas para escuchar con atención el taladro de Rumondo.

Las preguntas amenazaban con abrir un agujero en la cortés fachada de Mizzello que le llevaría directamente a su pasado. Un pasado que no quería volver a abordar.

Mizzello no tenía por qué preocuparse. Ensimismados, los compañeros no le observaron colocar tranquilamente su cóctel en la bandeja, excusarse del interrogatorio de Rumondo, levantarse de su sillón reclinable y agarrar suavemente la cuerda.

Mizzello guardó silencio un momento. Luego se inclinó a babor sin dejar de seguir el rastro del enorme vehículo negro con cristales tintados que acechaba la costa. Se dirigía hacia su barco. De no ser por los prismáticos que le habían prestado, no habría visto salir del vehículo a los hombres de traje negro, gafas negras, sin nombre y caras olvidables.

Pero Mizzello nunca olvidaría. Se deslizó silenciosamente bajo la cubierta.

Se le revolvió el estómago por el vino. Buscó las pocas pertenencias que había traído a bordo y las metió en la pequeña bolsa de lona.

De vuelta a la cubierta, se dirigió hacia la proa. Asegurándose de que sus compañeros miraban hacia mar abierto, se lanzó por la borda a aguas poco profundas.

Como no quería causar ningún alboroto, se dirigió hacia el extremo más alejado de la alcoba y descansó un segundo en la orilla arenosa.

Ahora estaba perdido entre la multitud de bañistas.

Mizzello subió la empinada entrada, dobló la esquina hacia la pasarela y caminó a paso ligero hacia la villa. No se detuvo hasta que la llave cerró la puerta desde el otro lado de su suite y cerró las cortinas.

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Se golpeó la cabeza contra la puerta. Dándose la vuelta, se deslizó hasta el suelo. Con las rodillas en alto, se apretó las sienes entre ellas hasta que le palpitó la cabeza.

Su pequeño negocio de soldadura y el de su socio. Su hipoteca. Todo había desaparecido. Embargado con el consentimiento de su socio. ¿Por qué le traicionó su socio para descubrir que había fallecido más tarde? Y su hermosa esposa y su adorable hijo. Desaparecidos. No tenía pruebas para demostrar a las autoridades y a su propia familia que era inocente de cualquier fechoría en su negocio o en la desaparición de su familia.

Podía sufrir la pérdida de su negocio y de su socio, pero el paradero de su familia era atroz.

Mizzello sabía que la suerte no estaba a su favor tras enterarse de que su familia se había vuelto contra él. Era como si su vida anterior fuera un capítulo de una de las numerosas novelas de misterio que le gustaba leer.

No podía quedarse sentado agonizando. Tenía que actuar.

Secándose la desesperación con la manga, se levantó. Siempre atento a utilizar sólo una parte determinada de cualquier habitación, recorrió su interior, limpiando su estancia, especialmente la instalación.

Arrojó su bolsa de lona junto con el escaso atuendo de viaje en la pequeña maleta, empezó a cerrarla y luego volvió a abrirla. En un pequeño compartimento, su dedo se posó sobre una foto familiar y un anillo de boda. Echó un vistazo rápido a ambos, luego cerró y bloqueó el equipaje. Sus problemas eran reales.

Mizzello limpió la llave y la colocó bajo el felpudo.

Siempre vigilante, rara vez se relajaba. El fingimiento se convertía en su obra maestra en compañía de otros. Solo, su equipo de vigilancia le mantenía a salvo de sorpresas indeseadas. Había que mantener a raya la sospecha. Las villas privadas permitían mezclarse a individuos con historias veladas. Con ayuda, desapareció en la escena turística de la playa.

Menos mal que no eligió, cuando se lo ofrecieron, el bungalow frente al lago que había disponible. Escondido entre los caros alquileres frente a la playa, en cuarta fila, le proporcionaba una pequeña dosis de anonimato. Echó un vistazo al coche de alquiler aparcado junto a su cabaña.

Visitante por invitación, no se registró con su nombre real. Esconderse entre los ricos y famosos le proporcionaba una vía de escape en caso necesario.

No era por falta de comodidad por lo que ahora interrumpía este retiro particularmente agradable.

Suspiró un suspiro temporal y luego registró rápidamente el lugar desde su punto de vista. En pocos minutos, se dirigió hacia el sur.

Mientras cabalgaba la corta distancia que lo separaba de la ciudad, Mizzello no podía evitar reflexionar sobre la posibilidad de localizar algún día a su familia y limpiar su reputación.

Pero las autoridades no estaban interesadas en descubrir la verdad. Su historia tejía un relato demasiado inverosímil para ser auténtico. Era más fácil creer que su mujer había escapado de un matrimonio plagado de problemas insalvables. Cómo surgió alguna prueba que demostrara su afirmación a las autoridades era la cuestión que desconcertaba a Mizzello.

Por ridículo que fuera, sabía sin lugar a dudas que aquellos mismos hombres que secuestraron a su familia le perseguían ahora a él. Y no tenía ni idea de por qué.

Sus fondos se estaban agotando. No sabía cuánto tiempo podría aguantar. Pero estaba decidido a descubrir el origen del misterio.

Mizzello se quedó de pie detrás de la entrada de la estación mientras esperaba el tren.

Dejar a su amigo sin una palabra era agridulce. Pero Alex lo entendería. Se pondría en contacto con él más adelante, una vez que se hubiera asentado.

Era bueno tener a alguien que creyera en ti y en quien pudieras confiar sin dudarlo.

Mizzello miró hacia atrás por última vez mientras el tren doblaba la esquina y desaparecía por el túnel.

[continuará]

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For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of:

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de:

@mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2137: lack of comfort

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Indeed there is no rest for the weary! What a thrilling ride of suspense and mystery. You kept me on the edge of my seat with the way you build the tension right from when Rumondo began with the probing questions as though he knew Mizzello's past was questionable. I wonder who those mysterious men in black are. Or maybe Rumondo is one of them? 😄

It's not a fun life looking over one's shoulders and always in a state of anxiety and suspicion. I hope Mizzello uncovers the truth surrounding his family's disappearance and solve the mystery of his partner's death. This is a captivating read. Your love for mystery and action-packed fiction shines through. Well done! Take care and have a great day. !PIMP 💕

Hello @kemmyb. Rest for the weary...Indeed not. I feel that alone a person can sometimes make decisions that may not be in their best interest in pursuit of justice or if felt they are unjustly victimized. The situation , I feel may not get better or turn out satisfactory for my character. I do wish him well on his quest. A difficult journey he had ahead if he chooses to face it alone. He had numerous obstacles and perhaps enemies.

No, it is not fun in a worry state of mind. How will he support himself on the run? What will happen to his former state of affairs as he knew it. To just up and leave your home and your extended family. Difficult choices indeed.

I'm pleased you found my story interesting with the various mysterious to be solved. Thanks for your kind compliment and your support. I appreciate it.

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I know he must have been very confused when he saw that the kidnappers of his family are chasing him
This situation may be very frustrating
Nice story!

Yes, @rafzat he was frustrated not being able to locate his family and under suspicion for causing their disappearance. I feel asa though he will keep trying to find them.

Thanks so much for your visit and nice compliment I appreciate it. Take care.

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Whenever a person is kidnapped in this way, there is a lot of trouble for his family as we see in this story.

Yes, there is stress on the family. My character doesn't know what happened to his family, but he does know he is not responsible, and that his wife did not leave him. He loved her and his child.

We'll see if he can resolve this and find out what happened to his family and his co-worker.

Thanks so much for your visit and thoughtful comment. I appreciate it and your support.

Take care.
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