A Different Perspective - A ZapFic100 Story | Based on @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2046 | Prompt: not obese (no obeso) [Eng/Esp]

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Drabble: A 100 word story written using the word prompt "not obese".

...Often people mistakenly pass judgement on situations they don't readily understand. This can also apply to animals in general or ones kept as pets. Sometimes the solution is a medical problem that may develop quickly and go undetected. You just can't assume without having facts. I share a micro-story that is in the format of a ZAPFIC100. This type of story is told in exactly 100 words. @felt.buzz created this format.

For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2046. Prompt: not obese.

Below is my story:

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"Am not!" Amanda screamed.

"You are too!" Summer retorted.

The yelling intensified. Mr. Peterson quickly dashed to the stairs.

He shouted. "what's going on, Amanda? If you don't behave, you won't be allowed to have another sleepover?"

Taking two stairs at a time, he stood in the middle of best friends.

Amanda sniffled while crying, "Summer said Olive is obese because we stuff her with too much food."

"That's what I heard my mother say." Summer crossed her arms in defiance.

"No,. That's not true, Summer. Olive is sick with a medical condition called Hypothyroidism. Just like a human condition."

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Drabble: Una historia de 100 palabras escrita usando la palabra "no obeso".

...A menudo la gente juzga erróneamente situaciones que no comprende fácilmente. Esto también puede aplicarse a los animales en general o a los que se tienen como mascotas. A veces la solución es un problema médico que puede desarrollarse rápidamente y pasar desapercibido. No se puede suponer sin tener datos. Comparto un microrrelato que tiene el formato de un ZAPFIC100. Este tipo de historia se cuenta en exactamente 100 palabras. @felt.buzz creó este formato.

Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2046. Prompt: not obese.

A continuación mi historia.

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Una perspectiva diferente

"¡No lo estoy!" Amanda gritó.

"¡Tú también!" replicó Summer.

Los gritos se intensificaron. El Sr. Peterson corrió rápidamente hacia las escaleras.

Gritó. "¿Qué está pasando, Amanda? Si no te portas bien, ¿no te dejarán volver a hacer otra fiesta de pijamas?".

Tomando dos escaleras a la vez, se paró en medio de las mejores amigas.

Amanda moqueó mientras lloraba: "Summer dijo que Olive es obesa porque la atiborramos con demasiada comida".

"Eso es lo que oí decir a mi madre". Summer cruzó los brazos en señal de desafío.

"No. Eso no es cierto, Summer. Olive está enferma de una condición médica llamada Hipotiroidismo. Igual que una condición humana".

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The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 100 words to create my ZapFic100.

La captura de pantalla en WORDCOUNTER.net evidencia mi uso de exactamente 100 palabras para crear mi ZapFic100.

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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actually my mom have this disease and for her is really hard to lose weight... i have seen her a little fat all my life and it all started after her pregnancy, but she acepted it and is not "suffering" it.

Hello @malos10. Yes, this disease is hard on the body. I know for a fact that the inability to lose weight is an effect.

Thanks for sharing your story.

Take care.

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Nice story and a short one
It is so lovely

Hello @rafzat. Thanks for your visit. I'm pleased you liked my short story. Yes, animals suffer with some of the same ailments as humans. I appreciate your support.

Take care.

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