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RE: What's Done In the Dark (Part 1) - Freewrite: 12/1/23 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

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Two forest dwellers looking for shelter in front of a wire fence, the hedgehog Joe and the fox Leo, found themselves faced with an unusual situation. Joe, with his body bristling with quills, and decided to cross an old burrow, he had to slip through a small hole while Leo, agile, had to jump over the fence. The hedgehog took the lead and entered the burrow, its spines slowing it down a little. After a few moments, he managed to pass, but with difficulty. Meanwhile, Leo, graceful and fast, jumped with ease and landed on the other side of the fence.Once across, he noticed that a new challenge presented itself to them: a large puddle of muddy and stagnant water. For Joe, the task was much more complex due to his small size. Its short legs made crossing the water perilous, risking immersing it entirely in the water. For his part, Leo, taller and more agile, thought it would be easy. But destiny decided otherwise. As he moved forward confidently and with water only on his lower legs, a deeper than expected hole in the road suddenly swallowed him up to his neck, immobilizing him for a moment.Joe, despite his small size, is doing quite well. Using his instincts, he crossed carefully and simply skirted around the puddle. Meanwhile, the fox Leo, struggling and struggling mightily. With determination, he found a higher ledge, allowing him to get out of the water. A little wet but unharmed, he finally joined Joe on dry land. After crossing the pool of water and reaching the other side, below the tall trees, their hope of finding refuge was awakened. However, to their great disappointment, a wide road lay ahead of them, with incessant cars passing by. Too dangerous for these forest creatures...

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Hello @cyboule. If you want to participate in the Freewriters Community writing challenges, then publish your post above. If you look at the link to the challenge in my post, you'll see the guidelines.

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