What a thrilling and mysterious tale of rivalry for the title of "King of the Dead"! 😂 I thought at first, what's the significance of this title again? Only to read the part of the janitor's intervention being met with a fire bolt! 😬
Luthern and Ruffusz are both funny characters and Luthern's insistence makes me chuckle. The way you build the tension and intrigue is admirable. You make your readers eager for more of this afterlife world and its inhabitants. And the complete image is beautiful and very well depicts your two main characters. Well done! !PIMP !LUV